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Airport Visitors, 1995-2000 (millions of passengers per year)

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The bar chart presents the amount of people that visited New York through three major airports between 1995 - 2000. Overall, throughout the six year period the number of passengers using LaGuardia and Newark airports had an upward trend however John F. Kennedy airport users fluctuated. Over the years the most favored airport by passengers was LaGuardia. Elaborating the graph, it can be seen John F. Kennedy airport had about 26m travellers at the beginning, which then gradually increased to 48m in 1997 which was its peak. The number of passengers slightly dipped over the next 2 years to 32m but then spiked up to 44m. On the flip side, the number of passengers using LaGuardia started at 35m and marginally rose to 69m over the period, reaching its highest point and making it the most popular airport. LaGuardia was also used more than any other airport every year except 1997 where John F. Kennedy airport had about 4m more passengers. Lastly, looking at Newark airport, began with the least amount of travellers in 1995. The numbers increased remarkably for 2 years, reaching 41m in 1998. The numbers remained stable at 41m for the next 2years.
The bar chart presents the amount of
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people
that visited New York through three major
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airports
between
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1995 - 2000
.

Overall
, throughout the six
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year
period the
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number
of
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passengers
using LaGuardia and Newark
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airports
had an upward trend
however
John F. Kennedy
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airport
users fluctuated. Over the years the most favored
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airport
by
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passengers
was LaGuardia.

Elaborating the graph, it can be
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seen
John F. Kennedy
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airport
had about
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26m
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travellers
at the beginning, which then
gradually
increased to
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48m
in 1997 which was its peak. The
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number
of
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passengers
slightly
dipped over the
next
2 years to
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32m
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but
then spiked up to
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44m
.

On the flip side, the
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number
of
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passengers
using LaGuardia
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started
at
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35m
and
marginally
rose to
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69m
over the period, reaching its highest point and making it the most popular
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airport
. LaGuardia was
also
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used
more than any other
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airport
every
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year
except 1997 where John F. Kennedy
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airport
had about
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4m
more passengers.

Lastly
, looking at Newark
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airport
, began with the least amount of
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travellers
in 1995. The
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numbers
increased
remarkably
for 2 years, reaching
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41m
in 1998. The
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remained stable at
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41m
for the
next
2years.
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IELTS academic Airport Visitors, 1995-2000 (millions of passengers per year)

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  American English
5 paragraphs
196 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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