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The maps details plans for the renovation in the next year of Southwest Airport.

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The maps details plans for the renovation in the next year of Southwest Airport. Looking from an overall perspective, the airport will be expanded to provide more gates, and the addition of other new facilities will offer more convenience for both departing and arriving passengers. The location of the departure and arrival entrances will remain the same but there are plans to install additional doors. Upon entering the airport, there is currently a single check-in and cafe. The future plan projects moving the check-in from the left to right side of the departure space in order to make room for a bag drop area and the repositioning of the cafe. At present, security, passport control and customs are the only services in the hall. However, there will be a cafe, ATM machines and car hire arriving passengers can use after clearing the formalities in the next year. The largest alterations is replacing a walkway with a long sky train track and constructing 2 branching corridors that will enable to reach more than twice as many gates (8 at the moment and 18 after developments).
The maps
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details
plans for the renovation in the
next
year of Southwest Airport. Looking from an
overall
perspective, the airport will
be expanded
to provide more gates, and the addition of other new facilities will offer more convenience for both departing and arriving passengers.

The location of the departure and arrival entrances will remain the same
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but
there are plans to install additional doors. Upon entering the airport, there is
currently
a single
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
-in and
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
. The future plan projects moving the
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check
-in from the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
to right side of the departure space in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
room for a bag drop area and the repositioning of the
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
.

At present, security, passport control and customs are the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
services in the hall.
However
, there will be a
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
,
This phrase is redundant ('M' stands for 'machine'). Use simply "ATMs".
ATM machines
and car hire arriving passengers can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
after clearing the formalities in the
next
year. The largest alterations is replacing a walkway with a long sky train
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
track
and constructing 2 branching corridors that will enable to reach more than twice as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
gates (8 at the moment and 18 after developments).
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