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THE DIAGRAM BELOW REPRESENTS THE PROCESS FOR PRODUCING BIODIESEL

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The picture depicts the producing cycle of biodiesel. It is clearly seen that the process experiences six different steps, starting with using sun energy and ending up with the transformation of Carbon dioxide. To begin with, a little seedling is grown up with solar energy, which is called a renewable source such as rapeseed or algae. After that, this tiny plant witnesses a significant transformation into oil and being extracted to become two types of product. The high protein residue by-product is used for livestock feeding and the main one continues the route. The third stage of the process is making the recent product turn into a completed biodiesel product. Besides, the by-product which is made of glycerine is consumed as a material for manufacture food and cosmetic items. Turning to the last three steps, when it becomes a renewable fuel resource, it is used in the petrol station to give energy for vehicles. At the end of the rotation, due to technological advancements, the carbon footprint is produced dramatically and by the power of the sun, carbon dioxide return into a miniature shrub.
The picture depicts the producing cycle of

biodiesel. It is
clearly
seen
that the process

experiences six
different
steps, starting with

using sun energy and ending up with the

transformation of Carbon dioxide.

To
begin
with, a
little
seedling
is grown
up

with solar energy, which
is called
a

renewable source such as rapeseed or algae.

After that, this tiny plant witnesses a

significant transformation into oil and
being extracted
to become two types of product.

The high protein residue by-product is
used


for livestock feeding and the main one

continues the route. The third stage of the

process is making the recent product turn

into a completed biodiesel product.
Besides
,

the by-product which
is made
of
glycerine
is consumed
as a material for manufacture

food and cosmetic items.

Turning to the last three steps, when it

becomes a renewable fuel resource, it is

used
in the petrol station to give energy for

vehicles. At the
end
of the rotation, due to

technological advancements, the carbon

footprint
is produced
dramatically
and by the

power of the sun, carbon dioxide return into

a miniature shrub.
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