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CARBON DIOXIDE EMISSIONS PER PERSON IN THE UK, SWEDEN, ITALY AND PORTUGAL

CARBON DIOXIDE EMISSIONS PER PERSON IN THE UK, SWEDEN, ITALY AND PORTUGAL 9577w
The line graph given provides information about the average of carbon dioxide emissions in four different countries between 1967 and 2007. Looking from an overall perspective, it can be readily apparent that the emissions of carbon dioxide in Italy and Portugal experienced a growth over the period given while the ones in The UK were reduced. Sweden also followed a downward trend after a peak in 1977. Taking a closer look at the graph, it is clear that The UK was the country with the highest amount of emissions over the forty-year period. However, it underwent a slight reduction from around 11 metric tonnes in 1967 to just under 9 in the last year given. On the other hand, Sweden witnessed a sharp peak from 1967 to 1977 reaching almost 11 metric tonnes that year, just under the UK. Nonetheless, from that year to the end of the period, the emissions were gone down approximately 6 metric tonnes. Regarding the countries that experienced a dramatic growth in that kind of emissions over those years, Italy and Portugal, followed the same pattern. Portugal ascended around 4 metric tonnes from just over 1 to 5 and Italy had just over 4 metric tonnes and ended up reaching almost 8.
The line graph
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provides information about the average of carbon dioxide
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in four
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countries between 1967 and 2007.

Looking from an
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of carbon dioxide in Italy and Portugal experienced a growth
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the period
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while the ones in The UK were
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. Sweden
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followed a downward trend after a peak in 1977.

Taking a closer look at the graph, it is
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that The UK was the country with the highest amount of
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the forty-year period.
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, it underwent a slight reduction from around 11 metric tonnes in 1967 to
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under 9 in the last
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,
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under the UK. Nonetheless, from that
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to the
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of the period, the
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down approximately 6 metric tonnes.

Regarding the countries that experienced a dramatic growth in that kind of
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those years, Italy and Portugal, followed the same pattern. Portugal ascended around 4 metric tonnes from
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1 to 5 and Italy had
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4 metric tonnes and ended up reaching almost 8.
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IELTS academic CARBON DIOXIDE EMISSIONS PER PERSON IN THE UK, SWEDEN, ITALY AND PORTUGAL

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