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Accident reduction per kilometer in Bridgewater

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The bar chart gives information about the decrease of traffic accidents in Bridgewater due to the construction of extra lanes in the city. Overall, one can see the reduction of traffic accidents on all the motorways taken into account, M1, M2, M3, M4 and M5. The most striking improvement occurs in motorway 5, where traffic accidents drop off dramatically from just over 16 to just under 6 per kilometer. A similar improvement is seen in motorway 1, that has a decline of traffic accidents after the construction of extra lanes, from about 13 to just over 4 per kilometer. In contrast, the construction of extra lanes does not produce the desired effect in motorways 2, 3 and 4. In fact, in these roads the number of traffic incidents ONLY decreases respectively from over 16 to over 14 per kilometer in motorway 2, from 4 to 2 per kilometer in motorway 3 and from over 4 to 2 per kilometer in motorway 4.
The bar chart gives information about the decrease of
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in Bridgewater due to the construction of extra lanes in the city.

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the reduction of
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on all the motorways taken into account, M1, M2, M3, M4 and M5.

The most striking improvement occurs in motorway 5, where
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drop off
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16 to
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under 6 per kilometer. A similar improvement is
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in motorway 1, that has a decline of
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after the construction of extra lanes, from about 13 to
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4 per kilometer.

In contrast
, the construction of extra lanes does not produce the desired effect in motorways 2, 3 and 4. In fact, in these roads the number of
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incidents
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14 per kilometer in motorway 2, from 4 to 2 per kilometer in motorway 3 and from
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4 to 2 per kilometer in motorway 4.
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