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The chart show the people ate five portion of fruit and vegetables

The chart show the people ate five portion of fruit and vegetables Mm2yp

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of 3 different age such as women, man and children who consumed five portion of fruit and vegetables each day in the UK between 2001 to 2008. Overall, people who consumed fruit and vegetable the most is women, the second one is men and finally is children. At the beginning, it can be seen in the first 3 years that children and men consuming stabilized at above 10% and 15% respectively. In the meantime, women consuming increased moderately. In the addtional, people consuming steady grew from 2004 to 2006. Moreover, women proportion reached the highest point at above 30% In 2007, Children continues gradual climbed but dropped in 2008 as same as women and men.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of 3 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 age such as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
women
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 and children who consumed five portion of fruit and vegetables each day in the UK Use "between" + "and" not "to."  Try this: "between 2001 and 2008".between 2001 and 2008
between 2001 to 2008
.

Overall
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who consumed fruit and vegetable the most is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
women
, the second one is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 and finally
 is children.

At the beginning, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in the first
 3 years that children and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 consuming stabilized at above 10% and 15% respectively
. In the meantime, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
women
 consuming increased moderately
.

In the Possible spelling mistake found.additional
addtional
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 consuming steady grew from 2004 to 2006. Moreover
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
women
 proportion reached the highest point at above 30%

In 2007, Children continues gradual climbed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 dropped in 2008 as same as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlwifedaughtermothershe
women
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
. 