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The following diagram represents about the steps of how the brick was manufactured. There are six steps, starting from digging up and ending with the delivery.

The following diagram represents about the steps of how the brick was manufactured. There are six steps, starting from digging up and ending with the delivery. rLNDN
The following diagram represents about the steps of how the brick was manufactured. There are six steps, starting from digging up and ending with the delivery. Firstly, the clay needed to make bricks is dug up with the help of digger. Then the dug clay is spread on the metal grid and placed above the roller. After that, sand and water is added to the clay and this mixture is either poured into mould or gone into the process of wire cutting to produce bricks. Following this, the bricks are being dried in the drying oven for 2 to 3 days. Consequently, the dried bricks are heated in the kiln at moderate temperature (200 degree to 980 degree) and then at high temperature (870 degree to 1300 degree) respectively. Next, they undergoes the cooling process in the cooling chamber from 3 to 4 days. Finally, the bricks are packed and delivered to the final destinations by the truck.
The following diagram represents about the steps of how the
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brick
was manufactured
. There are six steps, starting from digging up and ending with the delivery.

Firstly
, the clay needed to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
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bricks
is dug
up with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of digger. Then the dug clay
is spread
on the metal grid and placed above the roller. After that, sand and water is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
added
to the clay and this mixture is either poured into
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mould
or gone into the process of wire cutting to produce bricks.

Following this, the
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bricks
are
being dried
in the drying oven for 2 to 3 days.
Consequently
, the dried
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bricks
are heated
in the kiln at moderate temperature (200
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degree
to 980
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degree)
and then at high temperature (870
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degree
to 1300
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degree)
respectively
.
Next
, they
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undergoes
the cooling process in the cooling chamber from 3 to 4 days.
Finally
, the
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bricks
are packed
and delivered to the final destinations by the truck.

IELTS academic The following diagram represents about the steps of how the brick was manufactured. There are six steps, starting from digging up and ending with the delivery.

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