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The following bar chart has a total of 24 bars. Its Impossible to describe 24 pieces of information. 6NAkW
The Provided Bar Chart Compares the Information About That Consumer spending on six different items in Germany, Italy, France and Britain. In an overview it is evident that British people spent significantly more money than People in the other three countries on all six goods Intially, Having a glance on data it is crystal clear that People in Britian spent just over 170, 000 dollar on photographic film, which is the highest figure shown on the chart. By contrast, Germans were the lowest overall spenders, with roughly the same figure(marely under 150, 000 dollar) for each of the six products. Furthermore, The data reveals that the figures for spending on toys were the same in both France and Italy, at nearly 160, 000 dollar. However, while French people spent more than Italians on photographic film and CDs, Italians paid out more for more personal stereos, tennis racquets, arpund 145, 000 is the lowest figure shown on the chart. In conclusion, It can generlized that consumer spent the more money on photographic films.
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on photographic film, which is the highest figure shown on the chart. By contrast, Germans were the lowest
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IELTS academic The following bar chart has a total of 24 bars. Its Impossible to describe 24 pieces of information.

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