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The chart show the expenditure on three categories in different age groups

The chart show the expenditure on three categories in different age groups m30QL

The information about the percentage of expenditure on three categories in various age groups in 2004 is depicted by rendered bar graph. The data is calibrated in percentage. Overall, the demand of food and drink has increased throughout the period whereas going to restaurant and hotel has decreased. To begin with, People under 30 age groups liked to spend money on restaurants, which was almost 6% and hotel while it gradually decreased by 3% in the ages of 31-45 and 46-60 than it decline to a tiny fraction in the age of 61-75. Afterwards, it increased to 7% at age 76+. Initially, Food and drink were around 6% than it increased throughout the whole period and stood at approximately 24%. Moving further, Masses under 30 age group interested to spend on entertainment, which was on 7%. In the ages of 31-45, it rose by 2%. Then, it increased in the age groups of 46-60 and 61-75%. There was a slight decrease seen on entertainment in the age of 76+.

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