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rainwater collected from houses to use as drinking water diagram

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this diagram shows the process of collecting rainwater to use as a drinking water. overall, the rainwater collected from houses goes in water treatement plants and after that it sent back to houses to use as drinking water. intially, in this process, rainwater is collected from roof of houses. it goes directly into drains. Then from drains this water goes into water filter where is filtered from unwanted products and germs. After that, this water is stored in storage tanks. This storage tank is connected to water treatement plants. so, it passes through from storage tank to water treatement plant through a pipe, where water is treated with chemicals to make it drinkable. in the end water is sent back to the houses to use for drinking purposes
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overall
, the rainwater collected from
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plants and after that it
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intially
, in this process, rainwater
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from roof of
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into drains. Then from drains this
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filter where
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from unwanted products and germs. After that, this
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is stored
in storage tanks. This storage tank
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treatement
plants.
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, it passes through from storage tank to
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treatement
plant through a pipe, where
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is treated
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in
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IELTS academic rainwater collected from houses to use as drinking water diagram

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  American English
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127 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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