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The chart show number of cars produced in different country in 2003,2006 ans 2009

The chart show number of cars produced in different country in 2003, 2006 ans 2009 GNJAm
The gender tabular chart illustrates the information about the distinct three Nations such as Argentina Australia and Thailand who manufactured number of cars during 2003 and 2008 and 2009. Overall, after observing the given chart, it is clear that the highest number of cars were produced by Thailand whereas Argentina and Australia produced maximum car as compared to Australia over the given period. It is highlighted in this chat, in the beginning year, 166000 cars were manufactured in Argentina while the largest number of cars were produced in 2003 that was 538000. Addition to this, 420000 cars were produced by Argentina in 2006. Australia had produced 345000 cars in the year 2006. Moreover, in the last year 510000 cars were made by Argentina. In 2009, the lowest number of cars produced as Australia as compared to Argentina. moving further, in 2003, 187000 cars were produced in Thailand. Apart from this, after 3 year, the production of cars were inclined which was 1780000. Nevertheless, in the year 2009, cars were manufactured by Thailand.
The gender tabular chart illustrates the information about the distinct three Nations such as Argentina Australia and Thailand who manufactured
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