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the maps give information about changes in the town in 1980 and 2005

the maps give information about changes in the town in 1980 and 2005 RkV7P
the maps show changes which occurred between 1980 and 2005. It is evident that a lot of trees were cut down and two storey houses were converted into multi-storey buildings. To begin with, at the beginning of the period the town was a much greener residential area with a large number of trees and individual houses, but during the next 25 years the town experienced a number of dramatic change. The most considerable is that all of the trees were cut down which grew in the south of the River Alanah, with all the houses along the railway line being destroyed and replaced by skyscrapers. Moreover, in the new industrial zone lots of factories were built in the south of the river. In the north of the town new stadium, parking station and park were constructed in 2005. New stretch of railway form the river running directly north. A marine was also built at the south of the river.
the
maps
show
changes
which occurred between 1980 and 2005. It is evident that
a lot of
trees were
cut
down and two
storey
houses
were converted
into
multi-storey
buildings. To
begin
with, at the beginning of the period the town was a much greener residential area with
a large number of
trees and individual
houses
,
but
during the
next
25 years the town experienced a number of dramatic
change
. The most considerable is that
all of the
trees were
cut
down which grew in the south of the
River
Alanah
, with all the
houses
along the railway line being
destroyed
and replaced by skyscrapers.
Moreover
, in the new industrial zone lots of factories
were built
in the south of the
river
. In the north of the town new stadium, parking station and park
were constructed
in 2005. New stretch of railway
form
the
river
running
directly
north. A marine was
also
built at the south of the
river
.
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