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The chart represents the destination of Anthropology graduates from one university. Moreover, the table demonstrates the incomes of Anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart represents the destination of Anthropology graduates from one university. Moreover, the table demonstrates the incomes of Anthropologists in work after five years. oxE6K
The chart represents the destination of Anthropology graduates from one university. Moreover, the table demonstrates the incomes of Anthropologists in work after five years. To start with a full-time job, it had the largest proportion of about 52%, followed by the part-time work which took 15% of the total number of graduates. In addition, full-time postgrad study and unknown jobs had the same rate of about 8% each of the total graduates. However, the part-time job placement for postgrad students had the lowest percentages of about five percent. Hence, most of the Anthropology graduates have jobs. Turning to the salaries of Anthropology graduates, the government sector earns more than a hundred thousand, which is twenty percent more than that of the private companies. Besides, nearly the same percentage of those who get from $50000 to $74000 and between $25000 and $49999 as freelance consultants and government sector. Therefore, most of the graduates are employed in private companies rather than the government sector and freelance consultants. Overall, the table and the chart represent most of the Anthropology graduates are employed and enhancing salaries more than twenty-five thousand dollars after five years' work
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sector earns more than a hundred thousand, which is twenty percent more than that of the private
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from $50000 to $74000 and between $25000 and $49999 as freelance consultants and
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IELTS academic The chart represents the destination of Anthropology graduates from one university. Moreover, the table demonstrates the incomes of Anthropologists in work after five years.

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