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The graphs below show the popularity of comic books among various demographic groups over a 10 year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graphs below show the popularity of comic books among various demographic groups over a 10 year period. 7LJ3n
The bar graph Illustrate the popularity of comic book with the help of four different book among various age groups over the period of 10 years. The X -axis show the comic book such as X- MAN, AECHIES, AATRIX AND TINKLE, Y- axis show the percentage of people using book according to the age group Overall we can see that, Toddlers show least interest in reading comic book compared to teen and young adults in last 10 years In the given data we can see that, Both Toddlers and young Adults show 50% Popularity in Tinkle book which is less compared to Teen age group. Young adults have more attracted to x-man book which is nearly 80% followed by Teens and Toddlers is 55% and 25% approximately. Following a similar Trend in both Archies and Asterix book, young adults read Archies and Asterix 75% and 60% Respectively. Among toddlers Astrix is most uncommon compared to Archies. 65 % of Teenagers show more interest in Archies than Astrix which is only 40 % popular and lowest among that demographic age
The bar graph Illustrate the popularity of comic
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book
among various
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groups over the period of 10 years. The X -axis
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the comic
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such as X-
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AECHIES
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AND TINKLE, Y- axis
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the percentage of
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people
using
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according to the
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group


Overall
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that,
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Toddlers
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interest in reading comic
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compared to teen and
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in last 10 years

In the
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data we can
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that, Both
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50% Popularity in Tinkle
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which is less compared to Teen
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group.
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Asterix
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,
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read
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75% and 60%
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is most uncommon compared to
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. 65 % of
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Teenagers
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more interest in
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than
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40 % popular and lowest among that demographic
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IELTS academic The graphs below show the popularity of comic books among various demographic groups over a 10 year period.

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