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The bar graph depicts the use of computers and internet in Nine Arab countries. At a glance there difference in the level of computers and internet uses in the Arab world. The UAE and Kuwait are leading ahead in the uses of computers, Lebanon is third. The UAy has 150 computers over 1000 inhabitants whereas Kuwait is 130, Saudi Arabia is 70 and Lebanon is 50. Some countries like Egypt, Moracco, oman and Syria has less than 20 per thousand Inhabitants. There is also a great difference between Internet uses in different countries. The UAE has by far the highest proportion of user with more than one - third. Kuwait is second by 100 user Lebanon is around 70. While in few countries like Jordan, Oman, Lebanon has more availabilities of Internet users than computers. Although Syria share ie negligible. To sum up, There are major difference between computers and internet uses in Arab world. However, The UAE is clearly leading ahead in the area in both the numbers of computers and internet.

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