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The bar graph shows the use of computers and internet in Arab countries. Summaries the information and make comparisons where relevant

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The bar graph depicts the use of computers and internet in Nine Arab countries. At a glance there difference in the level of computers and internet uses in the Arab world. The UAE and Kuwait are leading ahead in the uses of computers, Lebanon is third. The UAy has 150 computers over 1000 inhabitants whereas Kuwait is 130, Saudi Arabia is 70 and Lebanon is 50. Some countries like Egypt, Moracco, oman and Syria has less than 20 per thousand Inhabitants. There is also a great difference between Internet uses in different countries. The UAE has by far the highest proportion of user with more than one - third. Kuwait is second by 100 user Lebanon is around 70. While in few countries like Jordan, Oman, Lebanon has more availabilities of Internet users than computers. Although Syria share ie negligible. To sum up, There are major difference between computers and internet uses in Arab world. However, The UAE is clearly leading ahead in the area in both the numbers of computers and internet.
The bar graph depicts the
use
of computers and internet in Nine Arab
countries
. At a glance there difference in the level of computers and internet
uses
in the Arab world.

The UAE and Kuwait are leading ahead in the
uses
of computers, Lebanon is third. The
UAy
has 150 computers over 1000 inhabitants whereas Kuwait is 130, Saudi Arabia is 70 and Lebanon is 50.
Some
countries
like Egypt,
Moracco
,
oman
and Syria has less than 20 per thousand Inhabitants.

There is
also
a great difference between Internet
uses
in
different
countries
. The UAE has by far the highest proportion of user with more than one
-
third. Kuwait is second by 100 user Lebanon is around 70. While in few
countries
like Jordan, Oman, Lebanon has more availabilities of Internet users than computers. Although Syria share
ie
negligible.

To sum up, There are major difference between computers and internet
uses
in Arab world.
However
, The UAE is
clearly
leading ahead in the area in both the numbers of computers and internet.
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