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The chart provide information the displacement of human from rustic to town region in three countries and forecast for future years.

The chart provide information the displacement of human from rustic to town region in three countries and forecast for future years. ynJ3
The chart provide information the displacement of human from rustic to town region in three countries and forecast for future years. Overall, at the outset it is clear that the for a long time movement from country sides to city areas has increase. The chart shows that in two countries starting from 2000 years grows up amount emigration people to city center, however in the third country indicated does not dramatically rises of urbanization. The Indonesian’s people transfer to city areas less of, while in the countries, such as Russia and Iran, have a rise up dramatically. • In the Republic of Indonesia and Persia about 2005 years was same indicator displacement human to town region, also the similar situation was in 2020 years in the Russia and Iran. • By 2025, the largest increase in the movement of people from rural to urban areas is expected in the Russian Federation and Islamic Republic of Iran. •
The chart provide information the displacement of human from rustic to town region in three
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countries
and forecast for future years.

Overall
, at the outset it is
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clear
that the for a long time movement from
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country
sides to city areas has increase.

The chart
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shows
that in two
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countries
starting from 2000 years grows up amount emigration
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people
to city center,
however
in the third
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country
indicated does not
dramatically
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rises
of urbanization. The Indonesian’s
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people
transfer to city areas less of, while in the
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countries
, such as Russia and Iran, have a rise up
dramatically
.

• In the Republic of Indonesia and Persia about 2005 years was same indicator displacement human to town region,
also
the similar situation was in 2020 years in the Russia and Iran.

• By 2025, the largest increase in the movement of
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people
from rural to urban areas is
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expected
in the Russian Federation and Islamic Republic of Iran.

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IELTS academic The chart provide information the displacement of human from rustic to town region in three countries and forecast for future years.

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