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The chart of athropologists

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The chart and the table illustrate the types of work and the salaries of the anthropologists in work after graduating from one unversity. It is clearly be seen that the half of the grudates get full-time work, followed by 15% of part-time work. There are 12% unemployed graduates, which is almos the same percentage with those who have part-time work. There are 40% of Anthropology graduates work as freelance consultant with the hightest salary range, which is more than 100000 dollars, which is identical to the students who can make 75000 to 99999 dollars. In the government sector, there are half of the graduates who can earn more than 100000 dollars wheras in the private companies, only 30% of the graduates could earn the same amount of money. Both in freelance consulting and government sector, the highest paid graduates take up 80%. However, only about 55% could earn the same amount of salaries in private companies.
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and the salaries of the anthropologists in
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full-time
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, followed by 15% of part-time
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. There are 12% unemployed
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graduates
, which is
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the same percentage with those who have part-time
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work
. There are 40% of Anthropology
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graduates
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work
as freelance consultant with the
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hightest
salary range, which is more than 100000 dollars, which is identical to the students who can
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make
75000 to 99999 dollars. In the
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government
sector, there are half of the
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graduates
who can earn more than 100000 dollars
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wheras
in the private
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companies
,
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only
30% of the
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graduates
could earn the same amount of money. Both in freelance consulting and
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sector, the highest paid
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take up 80%.
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about 55% could earn the same amount of salaries in private
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