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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world e98A

The illustrated charts below gives the information about the percentage of water consumed on different purposes in North America, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asia and South east Asia. Overall, There is a vast majority in consumption of water for agricultural use in six different countries in the world wherein a minor proportion was used for domestic. To begin with, 88%, 86% and 81% of water was designated for agricultural land in people who are living in central Asia, Africa and southeast Asia, respectively. However, the remaining small proportion were divided with industrial usage and domestic use. Furthermore, 48% in North America and 53% Europe consumed their water for business usage while 39% and 32% were for cultivated farming also the remaining small percent were consumed for inland use. To sum up, only a small number of percentage were used for inland purposes while the other proportions were for their farms.

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