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The chart illustrates the number of overseas applicants to Australian universities between 1999 and 2003, while the table shows overseas migration figures during the same period

The chart illustrates the number of overseas applicants to Australian universities between 1999 and 2003, while the table shows overseas migration figures during the same period ra5gL
The given bar chart gives information about the number of candidates to Australia universities of four countries and the table illustrates the data of foreigners' relocation from 1999 to 2003. Overall, the European Union had the highest number of applicants to Australia college in each year while in Africa, it is the lowest. In addition, the quantity of people who migrated abroad also increased over the period shown. Looking at the bar chart, between 1999 and 2003, the European Union and Far East reached the peak with a rise of nearly 90, 000 and 80, 000 respectively. In contrast, there was a modest fall in the number of people in the Middle East and Africa. According to the table, the United State's residents tended to migrate overseas with a huge number with 28, 740, 140 in 2003, higher than about 6, 000, 000 compared to 1999. Canada and Australia also had a rise each year as well, especially in 2003 with 2, 780, 950 and 122, 450 respectively.
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bar chart gives information about the
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of candidates to Australia universities of four countries and the table illustrates the data of foreigners' relocation from 1999 to 2003.

Overall
, the European Union had the highest
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of applicants to Australia college in each year while in Africa, it is the lowest.
In addition
, the quantity of
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people
who migrated abroad
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increased over the period shown. Looking at the bar chart, between 1999 and 2003, the European Union and Far East reached the peak with a rise of
nearly
90, 000 and 80, 000
respectively
.
In contrast
, there was a modest fall in the
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number
of
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people
in the Middle East and Africa.

According to the table, the United State's residents tended to migrate overseas with a huge
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number
with 28, 740, 140 in 2003, higher than about 6, 000, 000 compared to 1999. Canada and Australia
also
had a rise each year
as well
,
especially
in 2003 with 2, 780, 950 and 122, 450
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The chart illustrates the number of overseas applicants to Australian universities between 1999 and 2003, while the table shows overseas migration figures during the same period

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