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Summarise the informatioj by selecting and reporting the main features about travelling to work in Houston, Texas

Summarise the informatioj by selecting and reporting the main features about travelling to work in Houston, Texas mXrK1
The given table and bar chart illustrates information about different means of transport which people use to reach their work in Houston, Texas The most common means of transport is a car, with 48 per cent of people travelling to work alone. Besides, the number of people sharing a car is 11 per cent. Just ahead of that, 37 per cent of people using public transport like bus or train. The least means of travelling to work in the cycle, which 4 per cent of workers use. Looking at the information in more detail, people travelling on buses or trains at about 47 years old, which older than commuters walking or cycling eight years. There are about 43 and 44 years old people picking to select private car and shared car respectively. People travelling by car produce the most carbon dioxide over 0, 3 kilograms per person per kilometre. There was a difference in the number of dioxide emissions from sharing car and buses or trains with around 0, 05 and a tiny amount in turn. Dioxide emissions from cycle or walk registered the lowest figure out of the examined groups with 0 Overall, cars with just the driver are the most common means of transport to work and cause more pollution than all the other means of transport combined
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in Houston, Texas

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sharing a
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using public
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in the cycle, which 4 per cent of workers
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on buses or trains at about 47 years
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, which older than commuters walking or cycling eight years. There are about 43 and 44 years
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picking to select private
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produce the most carbon dioxide over 0, 3 kilograms per person per
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. There was a difference in the number of dioxide emissions from sharing
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and buses or trains with around 0, 05 and a tiny amount in turn. Dioxide emissions from cycle or walk registered the lowest figure out of the examined groups with 0

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IELTS academic Summarise the informatioj by selecting and reporting the main features about travelling to work in Houston, Texas

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