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The bar chart below illustrate the number of visitor to four London museums. Summarize and give relevant figures.

The bar chart below illustrate the number of visitor to four London museums. Summarize and give relevant figures. aQdPY

The bar graph indicates the figure of traveler to four distinct museums in London in 5 months. It is clearly that while British museum is most popular in London, National museums can't capture visitor's attention. In addition, Science museum is not the most interesting except in June. As a regarded to the number of traveler who visit history museum, it began at approximately 400000 and then significantly rise to 600000 in August, before sharply go down in the rest of the period. The figure for visitor to British museum which commence at around 420000, it considerably grow to 720000 followed is a remarkably drop after 2 moths. Around 210000 is the number of customer who visit National museum, this figure which fluctuate and peak at 190000 in the December. The figure for Science Museum at the start of the period was 410000, This number will have been staying stable for 2 months by August and falling in the last months.

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 of the period was 410000, This number will have been staying stable for 2 months by August and falling in the last months. 