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The chart illustrates the number of medals (Gold, Silver, and Bronze) obtained by a number of countries from North America, Europe, and Asia.

The chart illustrates the number of medals (Gold, Silver, and Bronze) obtained by a number of countries from North America, Europe, and Asia. kY0gn
The chart illustrates the number of medals (Gold, Silver, and Bronze) obtained by a number of countries from North America, Europe, and Asia. Overall, the USA gained more medals than any country. Both China and Japan are on the last podium, whereas the USA has a huge advantage over the second country. Also, all countries from Europe have almost the same quantity of medals obtained. According to the bar graph, the USA has roughly 980 Gold medals, 1, 700 Silver medals, and 2, 300 Bronze medals. Furthermore, the second country with most medals has less than 50% if compared with the USA, with an amount of 400 Gold medals, 170 Silver medals, and 1, 000 Bronze medals. Moreover, it shows that 11 countries have almost the same quantity of medals, where is indicating superiority in the first place, and similarity between them.
The chart illustrates the number of
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(Gold, Silver, and Bronze) obtained by a number of
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from North America, Europe, and Asia.

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, the USA gained more
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than any
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. Both China and Japan are on the last podium, whereas the USA has a huge advantage over the second
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.
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, all
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from Europe have almost the same quantity of
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obtained.

According to the bar graph, the USA has roughly 980 Gold
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, 1, 700 Silver
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, and 2, 300 Bronze
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.
Furthermore
, the second
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with most
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has less than 50% if compared with the USA, with an amount of 400 Gold
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, 170 Silver
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, and 1, 000 Bronze medals.

Moreover
, it
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that 11
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have almost the same quantity of
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, where is indicating superiority in the
first
place, and similarity between them.

IELTS academic The chart illustrates the number of medals (Gold, Silver, and Bronze) obtained by a number of countries from North America, Europe, and Asia.

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