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The chart illustrates the export earnings of a country in several catergories as well as the percentage change in values of these during 2015-2016 period

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The chart illustrates the export earnings of a country in several catergories as well as the percentage change in values of these during 2015-2016 period. Looking from an overall point of view, it is clearly shown that the spearheaded figure of this country was the exports of petroleum products while the lowest being textiles but which had the highest change in values between 2015 and 2016. A quick glance at the data suggests that petroleum products was the dominant figure with up to approximate above 60 billions dollars and had seen a 3% increase. The second place in export earnings were engineered goods in which had a revenue roughly close to petroleums products and also experienced a decent increase up to 8, 5%. Noticeably, gems and jewellery was the only catergory that suffered a decrease in revenue from more than 40 billions in 2015 down to loosely close to 40 billions dollars. On the other hand, agricultural products and textiles were approximately the same in 2016 which was above 30 billions but with a key difference that agricultural products only had a small 0, 81% increase while textiles undergone a sharp increase of 15, 24% in just one year. . Looking from an overall point of view, it is clearly shown that the spearheaded figure of this country was the exports of petroleum products while the lowest being textiles but which had the highest change in values between 2015 and 2016. A quick glance at the data suggests that petroleum products was the dominant figure with up to approximate above 60 billions dollars and had seen a 3% increase. The second place in export earnings were engineered goods in which had a revenue roughly close to petroleums products and also experienced a decent increase up to 8, 5%. Noticeably, gems and jewellery was the only catergory that suffered a decrease in revenue from more than 40 billions in 2015 down to loosely close to 40 billions dollars. On the other hand, agricultural products and textiles were approximately the same in 2016 which was above 30 billions but with a key difference that agricultural products only had a small 0, 81% increase while textiles undergone a sharp increase of 15, 24% in just one year.
The chart illustrates the
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earnings of a country in several
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catergories
as well
as the percentage
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change
in values of these during 2015-2016 period. Looking from an
overall
point of view, it is
clearly
shown that the spearheaded
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figure
of this country was the
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exports
of
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petroleum
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products
while the lowest being
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textiles
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but
which had the highest
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change
in values between 2015 and 2016.

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petroleum
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products
was the dominant
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figure
with up to approximate
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above
60
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billions
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dollars
and had
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seen
a 3%
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increase
. The second place in
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export
earnings
were engineered
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goods
in which had a
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revenue
roughly
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close
to
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petroleums
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products
and
also
experienced a decent
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increase
up to 8, 5%.
Noticeably
, gems and
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jewellery
was the
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only
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catergory
that suffered a decrease in
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revenue
from more than 40
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billions
in 2015 down to
loosely
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close
to 40
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billions
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dollars
.
On the other hand
,
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agricultural
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products
and
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textiles
were approximately the same in 2016 which was
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above
30
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billions
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but
with a key difference that
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agricultural
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products
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only
had a
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small
0, 81%
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increase
while
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textiles
undergone a sharp
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increase
of 15, 24% in
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just
one year.
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.
Looking from an
overall
point of view, it is
clearly
shown that the spearheaded
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figure
of this country was the
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exports
of
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petroleum
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products
while the lowest being
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textiles
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but
which had the highest
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change
in values between 2015 and 2016.

A quick glance at the data suggests that
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petroleum
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products
was the dominant
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figure
with up to approximate
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above
60
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billions
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dollars
and had
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seen
a 3%
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increase
. The second place in
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export
earnings
were engineered
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goods
in which had a
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revenue
roughly
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close
to
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petroleums
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products
and
also
experienced a decent
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increase
up to 8, 5%.
Noticeably
, gems and
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jewellery
was the
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only
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catergory
that suffered a decrease in
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revenue
from more than 40
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billions
in 2015 down to
loosely
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close
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billions
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dollars
.
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,
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agricultural
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products
and
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textiles
were approximately the same in 2016 which was
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above
30
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billions
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but
with a key difference that
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agricultural
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products
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only
had a
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small
0, 81%
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increase
while
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textiles
undergone a sharp
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increase
of 15, 24% in
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just
one year.
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IELTS academic The chart illustrates the export earnings of a country in several catergories as well as the percentage change in values of these during 2015-2016 period

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