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The chart illustrates internet usage among a country’s population given by age group in 2008 and 2018

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The given line chart illustrates the internet usage among a country’s population given by age group in 2008 and 2018Overall, it is clearly define that the both age group individuals used less internet according to age factor. As well as the users of internet remained decreased in both two yearsPrima- facie, in the year 2008 the 80 percent of adults used internet. The population of internet users in25-34 age was accounted as 70%. The population of internet users of 35-54 age group people was approximately 60%. But in the same year the percentage of old age people who used internet was accounted as 20% or 25%Further analysing, in the year 2018 the 100% of adult group used internet. But the percentage of users decreased according to age group and the approximately 90% of user was of 25-34 age group. The 35-44 age group users percentage was approximately 88%. The 80% of population used internet in 45-54 age. But the older age group who used internet in 2018was accounted as 50%
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IELTS academic The chart illustrates internet usage among a country’s population given by age group in 2008 and 2018

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