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The maps shows thr waterfornt section of a city before and after adevelopment project.

The maps shows thr waterfornt section of a city before and after adevelopment project. 0wKqn
Tis map Shows a changes and development in a city. Overall. it is clear that this city chang it to be city for tursems. First, in east there was a factory then it dimoleshed and were bulited aprtment buliding. Next, in north east there were ware houses then it staned hotel. Also, in the north west there was factory then it was dimolshed and were bulit new a partments. Next, in north west was container ship piers and then is changed and developed to be sutbal for toursems and big nombers of visitors. Finaly, in north there was factory then was destroyed and then built new park.
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north west
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partments
.
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north west
was container ship piers and then is
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changed
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sutbal
for
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toursems
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big
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of visitors.
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destroyed
and then built new park.

IELTS academic The maps shows thr waterfornt section of a city before and after adevelopment project.

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1 paragraphs
107 words
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