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he pie charts are compared 5 percentages of dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries from Republic of Korea, Sweden and United Kindom. Overall, there were some changes in the rates of all channels. In particular, All three countries had underground factories. However, United Kindom had the most number of underground products, at 82%. Likewise, the Republic of Korea had the least number of Underground manufactured items, at 22%. Furthermore, All countries produced incineration item and Swedan had plethora rate that products, at 20%. Other two countries, the Republic of Korea and the United Kindom had 9% and 2% respectively. In the Republic of Korea, recycling waste objects had a high rate of percentage, at 69%. Although, in Swedan, same recycling product had an average value, at 25%. Although, in United Kindom also dealt the chemical treatment and dumping waste products into the sea. Both products had same values, at 8%. Overall, in United Kingdom, underground materials were the most dealt products and incineration items (destroy waste by fire) was the least dealt product.
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