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In Australia both the genders in different age groups were continuously doing physical activity, as per the percentage shared in the bar chart, which can be seen as per the data information given below. Looking at the age group between 15 to 24, men were dominating the scale at 52. 8 percent as compared to females who were slightly below. Whereas the age group between 25 to 34, it was opposite where females were trending at par of 48. 9 percent and men were little low in doing physical exercises. The major change was seen in the age bracket of thirty-five to sixty-four when females went close to the chart end percentage of sixty percent where males weren’t in the competition. Furthermore, this showed the females in these ages were performing well when it comes to sports, which has body movements in motion daily. Although, this trend came to equality when the ratio in both the sexual category were sharing tables together, and here also a point difference communicated that woman’s were more active. In conclusion, the sex ratio when compared between males and females, the females showed tremendous results when it came to performing physical activity regularly thereby leaving the men’s behind who at many instances were not seen till far away. This totally proved that ladies are consistently presenting well in sports.

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