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Write a 150-word report describing the proposed changes for a local committee.

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The diagram illustrates the difference between the before and after of the Foster Road between SE 84th and 85th Avenue. After the proposed changes, the avenue would be turned into a more tree-lined avenue indicating more greenery around the road. It is also proposing to install bicycle lanes separately and broader sidewalks for the population indicating the road to be much more human-friendly. Along with this, there would also be a new crossing helping the individuals cross more safely which in 'the before' was not available. This would also lead to lesser accidents and a more organized way of crossing the road. The tree-lined up on both sides of the road will provide the necessary shade for the pedestrians and also a fresh air of oxygen. Overall, the proposed changes will make the road a safer area with a better pleasant environment for the individuals.
The diagram illustrates the difference between the
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before
and after of the Foster
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Road
between SE 84th and 85th Avenue.

After the proposed
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changes
, the avenue would
be turned
into a more tree-lined avenue indicating more greenery around the road.

It is
also
proposing to install bicycle lanes
separately
and broader sidewalks for the population indicating the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
to be much more human-friendly.

Along with this, there would
also
be a new crossing helping the individuals cross more
safely
which in 'the
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before
' was not available. This would
also
lead to lesser accidents and a more organized way of crossing the road.

The tree-lined up on both sides of the
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road
will provide the necessary shade for the pedestrians and
also
a fresh air of oxygen.

Overall
, the proposed
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changes
will
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make
the
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road
a safer area with a better pleasant environment for the individuals.
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IELTS academic Write a 150-word report describing the proposed changes for a local committee.

Academic
  American English
6 paragraphs
145 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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