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The chart gives the information about consumption of six goods in four European countries: Germany, Italy, France and Britain.

The chart gives the information about consumption of six goods in four European countries: Germany, Italy, France and Britain. k3gM

The bar chart depicts the information about Britain, France, Italy and Germany spent money on six various goods. To begin with, France and Germany spent money on personal stereos are similar near most 145 and Italy spent money more then 5. Britain dubble of 10 for Italy. Then Britain and Italy Invest money tennis racquets on equal that amount 155. France and Germany near about 145 to 150. Britain natives spent money on perfumes 160. Other Three countries almost 145 to 150. Moving further, the highest amount of spent money Britain was photographic film 170 and France less then 5. However Italy and Germany was 165. Germany Invest money on toys 145 and France and Germany are similar 155. Italy Invest money on CDs similar as perfumes. Along with Britain, France and Germany Invest money CDs approximate 145 to 165. Looking from an overall perspective. It Is readily apparent that Britain highest amount show interest for photographic films and lowest intrest show in personal stereos.

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