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Number of arrests per year for using illegal drug

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The line graph illustrates the number of arrests illegal drug use from 1991 to 2005. Overall, it can be seen that the number of arrests was deceased over the given period. In 1991, the number of arrests illegal drug use stood at 55. However, over the following two years, there was a sharp fall to 20 per year. The number then rose dramatically from 1995 to 1996 to 50 annually. 1996 to 1996 saw a fluctuation in the arrests rate, which was followed by sudden increase to hit a high at 80 in 2000. After that, the number of arrests plunged to a low of around 15 in 2001. It remained stable for the following year, but then increased gradually to 20, leveling off at this rate for the rest of the period.
The line graph illustrates the
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from 1991 to 2005.
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was deceased
over the
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period. In 1991, the
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of
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illegal drug
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stood at 55.
However
, over the following two years, there was a sharp fall to 20 per year. The
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then rose
dramatically
from 1995 to 1996 to 50
annually
. 1996 to 1996
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saw
a fluctuation in the
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rate, which
was followed
by sudden increase to hit a high at 80 in 2000. After that, the
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of
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plunged to a low of around 15 in 2001. It remained stable for the following year,
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then increased
gradually
to 20, leveling off at this rate for the rest of the period.
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IELTS academic Number of arrests per year for using illegal drug

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