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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. rPa2
The bar graph shows the percentage of households owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2010. In England, people are gradually shifting towards the owned house as we can see the percentage of household in owned accommodation is in increasing trend whereas of rented accommodation the percentage is declining. Moreover, in the late 20th century, the percentage of the household for both the year is equal. We can also notice a little fluctuation in the percentage of households for both of the accommodation in the later years. With regard to owned accommodation, the first 35 years were very challenging. The proportion of household for rented apartments for these years was around 70% while owned housing was only about 20% to 30%. The year 1971 was a game changer as a household for both the accommodation came into equilibrium reaching 50%. In contrast to the previous, years, people start preferring own house rather than rented which reduced to 40% in 1981 followed by approximately 30% in 1991 and 2001. However, 2011 experienced a little variation in the percentage of both the accommodation, with around 5% increment in rented and the same percentage reduction in owned accommodation
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and rented
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in England and Wales between 1918 and 2010.

In England,
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owned
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as we can
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the
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in
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owned
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accommodation
is in increasing trend whereas of rented
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the
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is declining.
Moreover
, in the late 20th century, the
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of the
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household
for both the
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year
is equal. We can
also
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households
for both of the
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accommodation
in the later years.

With regard to
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owned
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accommodation
, the
first
35 years were
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very
challenging. The proportion of
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household
for rented apartments for these years was around 70% while
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housing was
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about 20% to 30%. The
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year
1971 was a game changer as a
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household
for both the
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accommodation
came into equilibrium reaching 50%.

In contrast
to the previous, years,
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people
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preferring
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rather
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reduced
to 40% in 1981 followed by approximately 30% in 1991 and 2001.
However
, 2011 experienced a
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variation in the
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of both the
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accommodation
, with around 5% increment in rented and the same
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reduction in
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owned
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accommodation
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

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