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Chart given below shows tea and drinking habits in dive australian cities. Report main deature of the graph

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The bad chart compares the outcome of a survey undertaken in 5 different Australian cities regarding coffee and tea buying practices and consuming habits in the last 4 weeks. Overall, it is evident that although most of the people prefer to go to a cafe for drinking tea and coffee in all the 5 provinces, the percentage is relatively low in Brisbane and Adelaide. Furthermore, fresh coffee is one of the least purchases product as compared to the other two. Talking in detail about the figures, almost two thirds of city residents in Sydney Melbourne and Hobart visit a coffee shop for drinking hot beverages as opposed to Brisbin and Adelaide where the proportion is 55% and 49% respectively. However, instant coffee is consumed more in Hobart, Adelaide and Brisbane in relation to the remaining cities which accounts for more than half of population's choice, that is between 50% to 55%. On the contrary, the ratio of  freshly bought coffee in the is the lowest in all 5 territories wherin  around 43%  of citizens of Sydney and Melbourne consider shopping freshly brewed coffee followed by Hobart and lastly Adelaide and Brisba
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chart compares the outcome of a survey undertaken in 5
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Australian cities regarding
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coffee
and tea buying practices and consuming habits in the last 4 weeks.

Overall
, it is evident that although most of the
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people
prefer to go to a
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cafe
for drinking tea and
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coffee
in all the 5 provinces, the percentage is
relatively
low in Brisbane and Adelaide.
Furthermore
, fresh
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coffee
is one of the least
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purchases
product as compared to the other two.

Talking in detail about the figures, almost two thirds of city residents in Sydney Melbourne and Hobart visit a
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coffee
shop for drinking hot beverages as opposed to
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Brisbin
and Adelaide where the proportion is 55% and 49%
respectively
.
However
, instant
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coffee
is consumed
more in Hobart, Adelaide and Brisbane in relation to the remaining cities which accounts for more than half of population's choice,
that is
between 50% to 55%.

On the contrary
, the ratio of
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freshly
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bought
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coffee
in
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the
is the lowest in all 5 territories
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wherin
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around 43%
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of citizens of Sydney and Melbourne consider shopping
freshly
brewed
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coffee
followed by Hobart and
lastly
Adelaide and
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Brisba
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