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The chart gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

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The chart examines the levels of donation contributions by British people of different ages in two different years - 1990 and 2010. In 1990, 42% British people between the age of 36 and 50 donated to charity and this ratio was the highest. In contrast, only around 17% youth from che 18-75 age-group contributed to the philanthropy works which was the lowest. After two decades, both the ie percentages declined significantly, 35% and 7% respectively. While donation participation by the people up to 50 years old decreased in 2010, it sored among the people over 50 years old. In 2010, welfare donation by 51-56 age-group was 38%, a raise than 1990 and it was 35% by the 65+ age group, also an increase. Overall, British people gave more money for charity in 1990 than they did in 2010. However, people over 50 years old did just the opposite and a fewer younger British people donated to charity than the adults did both in these years.
The chart examines the levels of donation contributions by British
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In 1990, 42% British
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between the age of 36 and 50 donated to charity and this ratio was the highest.
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up to 50 years
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over 50 years
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. In 2010, welfare donation by 51-56 age-group was 38%, a raise than 1990 and it was 35% by the 65+ age group,
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gave more money for charity in 1990 than they did in 2010.
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over 50 years
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the opposite and a fewer younger British
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donated to charity than the adults did both in these years.

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