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The chart gives information on the home ownership by age group of household reference person in the UK between 1996 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart gives information on the home ownership by age group of household reference person in the UK between 1996 and 2016. EwJrq
The bar chart compares the proportion of people who owned a home by age group in the family in the UK from the year 1996 to 2016. Overall, the proportion of homeowners aged 60 and over had an increasing trend throughout these years, while the homeowner’s proportion in the 16-34 age group gradually decreased during this period. Looking at the chart in more detail, in 1996, homeownership families between the ages of 16 and 34 accounted for just over 53%, about 12% lower than those with homes from 60 years old. This figure was stable until 2001, then it decreased slightly to 50% in 2006. In contrast, the proportion of households with a place of their ownership aged 60 years and older gradually increased with 65% in 2001 and reaching 74% in the year 2006. From 2011 to 2016, the percentage of households owning a home in the age group 60 and older continued to increase and reached the peak of 76%. While the proportion of people with a home aged 16-34 gradually decreased to just over 35% in 2016.
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group in the family in the UK from the
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1996 to 2016.

Overall
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of homeowners aged 60 and over had an increasing trend throughout these years, while the homeowner’s
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in the 16-34
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decreased during this period.

Looking at the chart in more detail, in 1996, homeownership families between the
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of 16 and 34 accounted for
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over 53%, about 12% lower than those with
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from 60 years
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. This figure was stable until 2001, then it decreased
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to 50% in 2006.
In contrast
, the
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of households with a place of their ownership aged 60 years and older
gradually
increased with 65% in 2001 and reaching 74% in the
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2006.

From 2011 to 2016, the percentage of households owning a home in the
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group 60 and older continued to increase and reached the peak of 76%.
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over 35% in 2016.
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IELTS academic The chart gives information on the home ownership by age group of household reference person in the UK between 1996 and 2016.

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180 words
6.5
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