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The diagram illustrates how the cutting instruments used during the Stone Age developed between 1.4 million and 0.8 million years ago.

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The diagram illustrates how the cutting instruments used during the Stone Age developed between 1. 4 million and 0. 8 million years ago. Overall, it is clear that Tool B is sharper and more regular in shape than Tool A. Over a period of 0. 6 million years, the cutting tool became increased in size and effectiveness. In this process, the front view shows that the edges of Tool A are rough, revealing its earlier stage of development. Whereas Tool A is comparatively primitive, therefore, the smooth edges of Tool B are clearly more effective as a cutting instrument. One of the main differences between the tools is shown in the side view diagram. While Tool A is irregular, in contrast, Tool B has a regular, flattened shape. The sharp edge of Tool B is designed for cutting objects cleanly and easily. Finally, the back view shows most clearly that Tool A is not only rougher, but is also smaller than Tool B.
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during the Stone Age developed between 1. 4 million and 0. 8 million years ago.

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, it is
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clear
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B is sharper and more
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regular in shape
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Tool
A. Over a period of 0. 6 million years, the
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cutting
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tool
became increased in size and effectiveness.

In this process, the front view
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shows
that the edges of
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Tool
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rough, revealing its earlier stage of development. Whereas
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Tool
A is
comparatively
primitive,
therefore
, the smooth edges of
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Tool
B are
clearly
more effective as a
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cutting
instrument.

One of the main differences between the
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tools
is shown
in the side view diagram. While
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Tool
A is irregular,
in contrast
,
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Tool
B has a regular, flattened shape. The sharp edge of
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B
is designed
for
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cutting
objects
cleanly
and
easily
.
Finally
, the back view
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most
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that
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Tool
A is not
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rougher,
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B.
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IELTS academic The diagram illustrates how the cutting instruments used during the Stone Age developed between 1. 4 million and 0. 8 million years ago.

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