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Look at the two map of sun hills 1995 and today and compare.

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The two maps are shown below display a seaside village and how it has changed from 1995 to the present day. Overall, the village represents a small-scale community and is situated to the North of the sea. There is a main road running along the sea from West to East, and another running from South-East to North-West. In both maps, there is a housing district located in the North-West corner of the village. The most notable changes to the village from 1995 to the present day are the addition of a golf course and tennis courts where there used to be farmland and a forested area. Other changes include a new road which is running West and is roughly parallel to the seaside road. In addition, the old shops and fish markets in the South end have been transformed into seaside restaurants and apartments. The fishing port has also been removed, which opens up the beachfront.
The two maps
are shown
below display a seaside village and how it has
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
from 1995 to the present day.

Overall
, the village represents a
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small
-scale community and
is situated
to the North of the sea. There is a main road running along the sea from West to East, and another running from South-East to North-West. In both maps, there is a housing district located in the North-West corner of the village.

The most notable
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
to the village from 1995 to the present day are the addition of a golf course and tennis courts where there
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to be farmland and a forested area. Other
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
include a new road which is running West and is roughly parallel to the seaside road.

In addition
, the
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old
shops and fish markets in the South
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end
have
been transformed
into seaside restaurants and apartments. The fishing port has
also
been removed
, which opens up the beachfront.
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