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The pie chart shows which modes of transportation Edmonton residents prefer

The pie chart shows which modes of transportation Edmonton residents prefer RRGMW

The pie chart shows which modes of transportation Edmonton residents prefer, and a table shows the variables that most impact people's decision to drive in this location. Overall, vehicles and light rail transits are the two most common modes of public transportation in Edmonton, and driving a car in the city is mostly for the convenience of everyday employees. To begin, Edmonton is primarily served by two modes of transportation: vehicle and LRT. More than two-fifths of Edmonton commuters prefer to travel by private automobile, while around one-third prefer to take the light rail system. Commuting to and from the city via bus and cab both account for one-eighth of the total. Because of frequent commutes to work, a large portion of the community relies on vehicles. Other reasons for driving private automobiles include business services and picking up children from school, which accounted for 45 percent and 40 percent of total usage, respectively. Going to the mall and visiting a recreational park, on the other hand, shared the same percentage and were the least popular among other activities.

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