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The table shows the population rate in 10 countries between 2019 and 2100.

The table shows the population rate in 10 countries between 2019 and 2100. GrAYm
The given table chart gives information about the population figure in ten nations from 2019 to 2100. Units are measured by millions. Overall, it can be seen that the highest population has noticed in India and China, whereas this figure for Indonesia and Brazil was the lowest. However, it could be noted that India and Nigeria displays an upward trend in overpopulation, yet this ratio for China, Brazil and the USA shows a downward trend throughout the time period. Firstly, while the population figure had been accounted for 14 millions in China by 2019, which will a slight drop to 1 millions in 2100. In contrast, this rate for India had been noticed to 13 millions in 2019, but there was a significant rise to 1. 5 millions in the future. Secondly, although this figure for Nigeria had been 2 millions in 2019, which will tremendously augment to 7 millions in 2100. On the other hand, as this rate for Brazil and Indonesia had noticed by 3 millions and 2 millions respectively in 2019, those figures will remarkably decrease to 1 millions and 2 millions respectively in 2100. Lastly, even though this ratio for the USA had been 3 millions in 2019, it is estimated that this rate will a considerable decline to 2 millions in 2100. On the contrary, between 2019 and 2100, this figure for Pakistan will steady remind at 2 millions.
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table chart gives information about the population
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figure
in ten nations from 2019 to 2100. Units
are measured
by
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millions
.
Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the highest population has noticed in India and China, whereas this
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figure
for Indonesia and Brazil was the lowest.
However
, it could
be noted
that India and Nigeria displays an upward trend in overpopulation,
yet
this ratio for China, Brazil and the USA
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shows
a downward trend throughout the time period.

Firstly
, while the population
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had
been accounted
for 14
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millions
in China by 2019, which will a slight drop to 1
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in 2100.
In contrast
, this rate for India had
been noticed
to 13
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millions
in 2019,
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but
there was a significant rise to 1. 5
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millions
in the future.

Secondly
, although this
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figure
for Nigeria had been 2
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millions
in 2019, which will
tremendously
augment to 7
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millions
in 2100.
On the other hand
, as this rate for Brazil and Indonesia had noticed by 3
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millions
and 2
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millions
respectively
in 2019, those
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figures
will
remarkably
decrease to 1
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millions
and 2
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millions
respectively
in 2100.
Lastly
,
even though
this ratio for the USA had been 3
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in 2019, it
is estimated
that this rate will a considerable decline to 2
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millions
in 2100.
On the contrary
, between 2019 and 2100, this
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figure
for Pakistan will steady remind at 2
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millions
.
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