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The diagram below shows the stages involved in producing one bootle of wine .

The diagram below shows the stages involved in producing one bootle of wine. mLMp8
How to produce a bottle of wine is being illustrated by assigned layout. From overall analysis, it can be clearly seen that there are eight steps involved to produce wine. In the first stage grapes are picked, in the last stage is wine bottle is ready to go to supermarket. Initially, grapes are picked up and second step is 400 ripe grapes sent for 3000ml juice. After that, ferment process is start, after 14 days the grapes are pressed with the help of press machine and waste also produced after fermentation. 100ml liquid is produced after fermentation. Furthermore, filtration step is start and waste is produced after fifth step. Nextly, wine is stored in barrels and kept it into 750ml bottle. In the last step, wine is ready and sent it into supermarket for sale.
How to produce a bottle of
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overall
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clearly
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seen
that there are eight
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involved to produce
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wine
. In the
first
stage
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grapes
are picked
, in the last stage is
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wine
bottle is ready to go to supermarket.
Initially
,
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grapes
are picked
up and second
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step
is 400 ripe
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grapes
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sent
for 3000ml juice. After that, ferment process is
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start
, after 14 days the
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grapes
are pressed
with the
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help
of press machine and waste
also
produced after fermentation. 100ml liquid
is produced
after fermentation.
Furthermore
, filtration
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step
is
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start
and waste
is produced
after fifth
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step
.
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Nextly
,
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wine
is stored
in barrels and
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kept
it into 750ml bottle. In the last
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step
,
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wine
is ready and
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sent
it into supermarket for sale.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows the stages involved in producing one bootle of wine.

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