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The chart gives information about the leisure time in a typical week by 2 genders and employment status in 2 years.

The chart gives information about the leisure time in a typical week by 2 genders and employment status in 2 years. 73jP5
The chart gives information about the leisure time in a typical week by 2 genders and employment status in 2 years. Overall, The category with the largest data is unemployed and retired while the smallest data is employed full time. The table shows that males are a gender which enjoys more leisure hours than females. The category that have the highest hours of leisure time is retired and unemployed individuals in both sexes, which is spent for over 80 hours for males and under 80 hours for females. In contrast, employed full time has the smallest hours which is only over 40 hours for males and under 40 hours for females? . It can be seen that males spend more leisure time than females and they also have displayed no data in employed part time and housewives.
The chart gives information about the
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leisure
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time
in a typical week by 2 genders and employment status in 2 years.

Overall
, The category with the largest data
is unemployed
and retired while the smallest data
is employed
full
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time
. The table
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shows
that
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males
are a gender which enjoys more
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leisure
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hours
than females.

The category that have the highest
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hours
of
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leisure
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time
is retired
and unemployed individuals in both sexes, which
is spent
for over 80
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hours
for
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males
and under 80
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hours
for females.
In contrast
, employed full
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time
has the smallest
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hours
which is
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only
over 40
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hours
for
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males
and under 40
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hours
for females?
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.


It can be
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seen
that
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males
spend more
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leisure
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time
than
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females and
they
also
have displayed no data in employed part
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time
and housewives.
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IELTS academic The chart gives information about the leisure time in a typical week by 2 genders and employment status in 2 years.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
137 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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