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The chart demonstrates the number of male and female students learning 6 major subjects at a university in the US in the year 2010.

The chart demonstrates the number of male and female students learning 6 major subjects at a university in the US in the year 2010. GNAd2
The chart demonstrates the number of male and female students learning 6 major subjects at a university in the US in the year 2010. Overall, it can be seen that while Finance was the most popular, the opposite was true for Engineering. It is also notable that the biggest difference was seen in the number of boys and girls studying Maths. The figure for female students(230) learning Finance was similar to that for male students(230). The number of girls choosing Accounting was slightly higher than that of boys, with 200 and 170 respectively. Similarly, the quantity of female Marketing students was 120, whereas the figure for males was slightly lower, with just 80 students. The number of boys who studied Maths(200) was significantly higher than that of girls(60). Whereas, an Engineering course had an equal number of males and females, with around 50 students. In addition, the quantity of boys learning Economics was twice as high as that of girls, at 150 and 75 respectively.
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learning 6 major subjects at a university in the US in the year 2010.

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that while Finance was the most popular, the opposite was true for Engineering. It is
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and
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studying
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Maths
.

The figure for
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female
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students(230)
learning Finance was similar to that for male
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students(230)
. The
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number
of
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girls
choosing Accounting was
slightly
higher than that of
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boys
, with 200 and 170
respectively
.
Similarly
, the quantity of
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female
Marketing
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students
was 120, whereas the figure for
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was
slightly
lower, with
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80 students.

The
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of
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boys
who studied
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Maths
(200) was
significantly
higher than that of
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girls(60)
. Whereas, an Engineering course had an equal
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number
of
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males
and
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females
, with around 50
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students
.
In addition
, the quantity of
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boys
learning Economics was twice as high as that of
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girls
, at 150 and 75
respectively
.

IELTS academic The chart demonstrates the number of male and female students learning 6 major subjects at a university in the US in the year 2010.

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