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The charts give the figure of the devices that are used among 18 to 25 age group people to watch TV in Canada over decades.

The charts give the figure of the devices that are used among 18 to 25 age group people to watch TV in Canada over decades. JlaK0

The charts give the figure of the devices that are used among 18 to 25 age group people to watch TV in Canada over decades. It is apparently seen that nearly one-third of consumers utilized conventional TV in 2009 while only a tiny fraction of this device was in 2019. Laptop with 20percentages comes next when it is almost twice lower exploited after ten years. Moreover, 18%of the youth in Canada preferred desktop computers to watch in the year 2009 which utilisation was dropped to 6percent by the compared time. Another major device approved by viewers is mobile phone which consisted 15% but the quantity increased by 11percent over the period. In addition, 8% consumed flat screen TV that was noticeably rised to 27portion by 2019. It is clear from the pie chart that tablets have been used roughly insignificant minority. Still, the usage climbed just about 3times higher. To summarise overall data of consumption, we can conclude that utilisation of conventional TV has been diminished and the quantity of flat-screen TV usage has been grown up over the compared years in Canada.

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