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The line graph illustrates the number of 3 different types of crimes (car theft, house burgling, street robbery) in England and Wales between 1970 and 2005.

The line graph illustrates the number of 3 different types of crimes (car theft, house burgling, street robbery) in England and Wales between 1970 and 2005. LLPE1
The line graph illustrates the number of 3 different types of crimes (car theft, house burgling, street robbery) in England and Wales between 1970 and 2005. Overall, the number of 3 different types of crimes increased over the period. From 1970 to 2005, car theft had the highest number of crimes, while the lowest was street robbery. With regard to the amount of car theft, it began at 0. 4 million and then peaked at 1. 6 million in 1995 before falling dramatically to about 1 million in the last year. Likewise, house burgling had 0. 2 million in the first year and rose slightly before dropping to 0. 5 million. At the start of the period, both car theft and house burgling rose, while street robbery remained. In contrast, from 1995 to 2005, street robbery rose to 0. 2 million, while car theft and house burgling decrease.
The line graph illustrates the number of 3
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(car
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,
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house
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robbery) in England and Wales between 1970 and 2005.

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car
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theft
had the highest number of crimes, while the lowest was
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street
robbery.

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car
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, it began at 0. 4
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million
and then peaked at 1. 6
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million
in 1995
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house
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had 0. 2
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car
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and
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house
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rose, while
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robbery remained.
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robbery rose to 0. 2
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, while
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car
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and
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decrease.
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the number of 3 different types of crimes (car theft, house burgling, street robbery) in England and Wales between 1970 and 2005.

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