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the below graps shows the number of tourisr visitind a particular caribben island

the below graps shows the number of tourisr visitind a particular caribben island KVmqR
The given line graph describe the information about a number of visitor visit a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. To begin with, around 1 million visitors staying on a cruise ship on Caribbean island. Next, this ratio was increased sharply up to 2015, which was around 2. 75 million people staying on a cruise ship and followed that around 3. 5 million visitors staying on a cruise. Furthermore, around 0. 75 million people liked to stay on Caribbean island in 2010 and this amount was same up to 2011. In addition, in 2011 to 2013, there was increased in the number of individuals like stay on the island. Finally, in 2017, around 1. 5 million crowds like to spend their lesiure time on the island. Moreover, around 0. 25 million people visit the Caribbean island in 2010 and after that there was a some fluction will be occured upto 2013. Consequentely, after 2013 a number of visitor was sharply increased througout the period. Overall, high number of crowd like to stay on cruise ships as compared to island.
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visit a particular Caribbean
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between 2010 and 2017.

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visitors
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cruise
ship
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on Caribbean
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.
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around
2. 75
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million
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people
staying on a
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cruise
ship and followed that
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3. 5
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million
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visitors
staying on a
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cruise
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around
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million
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people
liked to stay
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on Caribbean
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in 2010 and this amount was same up to 2011.
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in the
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number
of individuals like stay on the
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island
.
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, in 2017,
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crowds like to spend their
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time on the island.

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million
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people
visit the Caribbean
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in 2010 and after that there was a
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fluction
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througout
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