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The two charts compare the online shopping trading for retail sectors in Canada between two years 2005 and 2010.

The two charts compare the online shopping trading for retail sectors in Canada between two years 2005 and 2010. 6mVkx

The two charts compare the online shopping trading for retail sectors in Canada between two years 2005 and 2010. In brief, it can be seen clearly while in 2005 the percentafe of electronics and appliance occupies the highest, the figure for food and beverage is the largest in 2010. While the proportion of video games accounts for the lowest in 2005, the same is true for the percentage of home furnishings in 2010. The electronics and appliance whose figure in 2005 is 35 % higher than those in 2010 is 5%. People who use home furnishings buy 25 percent in 2005, than those people consume in 2010 is 10 %. On the other hand, the figure for food and beverage rose dramatically from 2005 (22 %) to 2010 (32 %). The proportion of video games stood at 18 percent in 2005, lower than 5 % in comparison with the year 2010.

The two charts compare the online shopping trading for retail sectors in Canada between two years 2005 and 2010.

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 while in 2005 the Possible spelling mistake found.percentage
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 of electronics and appliance occupies the highest, the figure for food and beverage is the largest in 2010. While the proportion of video games accounts for the lowest in 2005, the same is true for the percentage of home furnishings in 2010.

The electronics and appliance whose figure in 2005 is 35 % higher than those in 2010 is 5%. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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use
 home furnishings This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 25 percent in 2005, Did you mean "then"?then
than
 those This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 consume in 2010 is 10 %.

On the other hand
, the figure for food and beverage rose dramatically
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from 2005 (22
 %) to 2010 (32 %). The proportion of video games stood at 18 percent in 2005, lower than 5 % in comparison
 with the year 2010. 