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THE CHART BELWO REVEAL THE INFORMATION ABOUT THE AMOUNT OF RAINFALL RECIEVED BY AN EASTA FRICAN COUNTRY ALONG WITH THE TEMPERATURE RECORDED OVER THE TWELVE MONTH OF THE YEAR.

THE CHART BELWO REVEAL THE INFORMATION ABOUT THE AMOUNT OF RAINFALL RECIEVED BY AN EASTA FRICAN COUNTRY ALONG WITH THE TEMPERATURE RECORDED OVER THE TWELVE MONTH OF THE YEAR. Awmae
THE PROCES CHART ILLUSTRATES THE MEDIAN MONTHLY RAINFALL ALONG WITH TEMPERATURE IN EAST AFRICAN COUNTRY IN ONE YEAR. THE UNITS ARE MEASURED IN MILLIMETRE AND CELSIUS. OVERALL, THE HIGHEST AMOUNT OF RAINFALL IS RECORDED IN THE MONTH OF RAINFALL WHEREAS, THE PEAK TEMPERATURE OBSERVED IN MARCH. IN CONTRAST, IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, IN BEGINNING COUPLE OF MONTH THE RAINFALL IS OBSERVED BELOW 50 MILLIMETRES AND IT ROSES TO NEAR 100 IN MARCH. THEN, IT EXPERIENCED DRASTIC INCREASES IN RAIN TO APPROXIMATELY 275. IN MAY IT FALLS TO AROUND 125 AND SLIPS TO NEAR 10 FOR NEXT QUARTER YEAR. AFTER THAT, IT SKYROCKETED TO 100 IN OCTOBER AND REMAIN CONSTANT ONE MONTH. FINALLY, IN THE MONTH OF DECEMBER IT IS ACCOUNTED FOR 50. THE CHART FURTHER COLLATE THAT, THE TEMPERTAURE BEGIN AT 22 DEGREES IN JANUARY AND ROSES TO ITS PEAK POINT OF 23. 5 CELSIUS IN MARCH. THEN, IT START DRAMATICALLY TILL THE MONTH OF JULY AND TOUCHES THE LEAST POINT OF NEAR 20. 5. IN AUGUST IT IS STATES AS 21. 5 DEGREES AND FACED DRASTIC INCREASES TILL OCTOBER WITH 23. 5. LASTLLY, IT DROPS TO MERELY ABOVE 21. 0 IN DECEMBER.
THE
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PROCES
CHART ILLUSTRATES THE MEDIAN MONTHLY
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RAINFALL
ALONG WITH TEMPERATURE IN EAST AFRICAN COUNTRY IN ONE YEAR. THE UNITS
ARE MEASURED
IN
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MILLIMETRE
AND CELSIUS.

OVERALL
, THE HIGHEST AMOUNT OF
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RAINFALL
IS RECORDED
IN THE
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MONTH
OF
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RAINFALL
WHEREAS, THE PEAK TEMPERATURE OBSERVED IN MARCH.
IN CONTRAST
,

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
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SEEN
THAT, IN BEGINNING COUPLE OF
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MONTH
THE
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RAINFALL
IS OBSERVED
BELOW 50
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MILLIMETRES
AND IT ROSES TO NEAR 100 IN MARCH. THEN, IT EXPERIENCED DRASTIC INCREASES IN RAIN TO APPROXIMATELY 275. IN MAY IT FALLS TO AROUND 125 AND SLIPS TO NEAR 10 FOR
NEXT
QUARTER YEAR. AFTER THAT, IT SKYROCKETED TO 100 IN OCTOBER AND REMAIN CONSTANT ONE
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MONTH
.
FINALLY
, IN THE
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MONTH
OF DECEMBER IT
IS ACCOUNTED
FOR 50.

THE CHART
FURTHER
COLLATE THAT, THE
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TEMPERTAURE
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BEGIN
AT 22 DEGREES IN JANUARY AND ROSES TO ITS PEAK POINT OF 23. 5 CELSIUS IN MARCH. THEN, IT
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START
DRAMATICALLY
TILL THE
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MONTH
OF JULY AND TOUCHES THE LEAST POINT OF NEAR 20. 5. IN AUGUST IT IS STATES AS 21. 5 DEGREES AND FACED DRASTIC INCREASES TILL OCTOBER WITH 23. 5.
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LASTLLY
, IT DROPS TO
MERELY
ABOVE 21. 0 IN DECEMBER.
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