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The given pie charts illustrate the proportion of seven various habits that the Britain people spending on between 1971 and 2001.

The given pie charts illustrate the proportion of seven various habits that the Britain people spending on between 1971 and 2001. bxNyP
The given pie charts illustrate the proportion of seven various habits that the Britain people spending on between 1971 and 2001. The general overview here is that the majority habit that the UK citizen expend was the food, while after 30 years later most of this people spent on the cars. According to the charts, it is clears that in 1971 the food indicated the highest amount of spending of the Britain people, accounting for 44%, after three decades, there was a remarkable decline of its figure of 30% to 14%. Moreover, the number of the books decreased steadily by 5% to 1% in 2001. Similarly, the payout extent of the furniture and petrol dropped slightly to 8% in each throughout the period. On the contrary, there were a amount of 2% of the computer payout in 1971, whereas its number rose moderately to 12% in 2001. Likewise, the Restaurant there were a gradual increase of 7% to 14% over passing 30-year. It was interesting to note that the figure of the cars experienced an noticeable increase by 21% to 43% over the period observed.
The
given
pie charts illustrate the proportion of seven various habits that the Britain
people
spending on between 1971 and 2001. The general overview here is that the majority habit that the UK citizen expend was the food, while after 30 years later most of this
people
spent on the cars.

According to the charts, it is clears that in 1971 the food indicated the highest amount of spending of the Britain
people
, accounting for 44%, after three decades, there was a remarkable decline of its figure of 30% to 14%.
Moreover
, the number of the books decreased
steadily
by 5% to 1% in 2001.
Similarly
, the payout extent of the furniture and petrol dropped
slightly
to 8% in each throughout the period.

On the contrary
, there were
a
amount of 2% of the computer payout in 1971, whereas its number rose
moderately
to 12% in 2001.
Likewise
, the Restaurant there were a gradual increase of 7% to 14% over passing 30-year. It was interesting to note that the figure of the cars experienced
an
noticeable increase by 21% to 43% over the period observed.
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