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Practice The maps below show the changes in an American town between 1948 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

Practice The maps below show the changes in an American town between 1948 and 2021. q0nPX
The contrasting maps illustrate how the construction of new buildings can change the landscape of a town over a 73 year period, from 1948 to 2021. Overall, despite some general changes like the relocation of buildings or the establishment of new facilities, its main structure remained almost the same. Additional constructions, such as the airport and commercial were established, while factories were removed. In 1948, there was a local supermarket in the west on the corner of the roads while in the year 2021, commercial buildings have been built and the supermarket was replaced by them. Consequently, a supermarket has been rebuilt in the north where the park once stood to replace the former local supermarket. This year, the factories in the northeast have been taken down and replaced with an airport, while the church was replaced with a sports stadium. On the other hand, there are a few details from the landscapes that remain the same. Buildings, such as the petrol station and the residential houses have remained in their places, and the roads, trees, and canal, are still there.
The contrasting maps illustrate how the construction of new
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buildings
can
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change
the landscape of a town over a
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73 year
period, from 1948 to 2021.

Overall
, despite
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some
general
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changes
like the relocation of
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buildings
or the establishment of new facilities, its main structure remained almost the same. Additional constructions, such as the airport and commercial
were established
, while factories
were removed
.

In 1948, there was a local supermarket in the west on the corner of the roads while in the year 2021, commercial
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buildings
have
been built
and the supermarket
was replaced
by them.
Consequently
, a supermarket has been rebuilt in the north where the park once stood to replace the former local supermarket. This year, the factories in the northeast have
been taken
down and replaced with an airport,
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while
the church
was replaced
with a sports stadium.

On the other hand
, there are a few
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details
from the landscapes that remain the same.
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Buildings
, such as the petrol station and the residential
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houses
have remained in their places, and the roads, trees, and canal, are
still
there.
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IELTS academic Practice The maps below show the changes in an American town between 1948 and 2021.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
181 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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