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The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.

The pie chart provides data about the Anthropology graduates and their work-life after completing their undergraduate degree course. The table illustrates the anthropologists in terms of their salaries in work after 5 years. Overall, It can be deduced from the chart that half proportion of undergraduates worked full-time whereas, few of them did part time work and postgraduate study. Although earnings were high for graduates who worked in the government sector. As it is presented, 52% of graduates did full-time work and it was the highest point compared to other options whereas full-time postgraduate study and unknown jobs accounted for only 8%. The number of graduates who were employed part-time and unemployed made up 15% and 12% respectively. It could be seen that after 5 years experience, 50% of graduates earned more than 100000 dollars from the government sector. The second highest salaries were related to freelance consultancies which were over the 750000 dollars whereas only 5% of workers in freelance consultancies and government sector earned under the 500000 dollars.
The pie chart provides data about the Anthropology
graduates
and their work-life after completing their undergraduate degree course. The table illustrates the anthropologists in terms of their salaries in work after 5 years.

Overall
, It can
be deduced
from the chart that half proportion of undergraduates worked full-time whereas, few of them did
part time
work and postgraduate study. Although earnings were high for
graduates
who worked in the
government
sector.

As it
is presented
, 52% of
graduates
did full-time
work and
it was the highest point compared to other options whereas full-time postgraduate study and unknown jobs accounted for
only
8%. The number of
graduates
who
were employed
part-time and unemployed made up 15% and 12%
respectively
.

It could be
seen
that after 5 years experience, 50% of
graduates
earned more than 100000 dollars from the
government
sector. The second highest salaries
were related
to freelance consultancies which were over the 750000 dollars whereas
only
5% of workers in freelance consultancies and
government
sector earned under the 500000 dollars.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
170 words
6.0
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