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The line graph graph lines demonstratesd the number of internet usersinternet users in nine middle-eastern different countries in as of June june 2017.

The line graph graph lines demonstratesd the number of internet usersinternet users in nine middle-eastern different countries in as of June june 2017. The number of visitors is counted in millions. Iran is the most country using the internet while Lebanon is the lowest. Overall, Iran had the highest use of internet by 56. 7 users in 2017 while Lebanon scored got the lowest use of internet by 4. 5 in the same year. In 2017, the internet users in the middle east Iran reached had the highest number of people using the internet in june 2017 by almost 56. 7 million. In saudi Arabia had s 24. 15 million users. While in Iraq and UAE came comes below theI iranians and Saudis in using the internet use by having almost half of the subscribers users in june 2017. In contrast, There was is a dramatic drop in the number of citizens people using the internet in Yemen, Israel, Jordan, Syria and Lebanon only from 4. 5 million to almost 7 million which showed is a huge difference from Iran and Saudi Arabia in June june 2017.
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IELTS academic The line graph graph lines demonstratesd the number of internet usersinternet users in nine middle-eastern different countries in as of June june 2017.

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